Story section improvements

Picking up pieces of the broken plinth, realise what they have been fighting over is meaningless now        

-     They survey the extensive damage: panoramic view of the damage (statues in silhouette, looking into the scene)

-   Suddenly the clock bell rings. Closeup of clock: at 9o’clock. They see the museum opening times on a noticeboard. (Close up) Suddenly realize that the museum will be opened in half an hours time

-     Young statue panics, Stephen calms him down; takes him by the shoulders, shakes him?

- They look at each other > close up of their eyes > split view, and they nod > do a fistbump

- They set about cleaning up the room > and knows the layout of the museum better, and so he lifts off and gestures to the young statue to toss him the items to be put back into place.

- They begin to work together > young statue throwing stuff to stanley, Stanley putting it back into place (Scene: Vase/ painting etc. being picked up, then thrown through the air to Stephen, who catches it and replaces it. Follow the item through the air.)

- Time is up, everything is almost in place, (slow motion of the clock hands sliding into place), they are in position on the rubble pedestal

Improved Part of story

- They survey the extensive damage: panoramic view of the damage (statues in silhouette, looking into the scene)

- Suddenly the clock bell rings. Closeup of clock: at 9o’clock. They see the museum opening times on a noticeboard. (Close up) Suddenly realize that the museum will be opened in half an hours time

-     Young statue wants to still fight but Stephen was calm; and turned around and headed to a corner of the room with the mess and started to pick up pieces.

- Young statue looked shock, to see Stanley not fighting with her and was on the process on cleaning up

- Young statue finally realized and tries to go beside Stanley to help.

- Young statue tries to put things away where stanley sees and help and guide.

- They begin to work together (Scene: Vase/ painting etc. pieces being picked up and put down on floor etc Silhouette)

- Time is up, everything is almost in place, but not perfect (slow motion of the clock hands sliding into place), Stanley tries to push young statue up the rubble pedestal OR stanley fly up to the rubble pedestal with Young statue in his arms and landed unstable.